comic / work in progress

iv e been thinking about a story for an animation for a while  and managed to storyboard it last week. i decided to tackle it by producing a comic  and here are a few images from my first attempt. because it was created with no planning the visual language is a bit confused as there are times when it falls into a grey area of neither possessing any intuitive charm or well considered  visual structure. as a vehicle to help the animation progress it is fine as it will naturally change from collaboration. but im thinking of also pushing it as a comic in its own right sometime in the future